Thentertainment chart below gives information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.
The given layouts highlight the methods by which water is utilised throughout the world, and in four regions: Canada, new Zealand, India, and China in 2000. the data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is crystal clear that among all countries most of the water had been used for one purpose ; farming in comparison to others.
as it can be observed in pie chart, it was worth noticing that lion share of water was consumed for agricultural purposes. 22% of water was being utilised in industrial sectors, even though domestic work required less than one tenth of water proportion.
moving further towards graph, Canada used one eighth water for industries, only 8 and 12 percent for domestic, and farming respectively. moreover, India was leading in water usage for irrigation while minor proportion of water was utilised in others. new Zealand had equal distribution of water in three methods. Likewise, India China also used water for agriculture by 69% , and 22% for domestic use and rest for industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13294797688 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73480962289 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8439212507 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222453604427 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966835926455 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337769566854 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133070130754 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203644129986 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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