there are a high number of people move to city to live . what is the reason of this phenomenon and how it affect our society
Yesteryear , the number of urban population has increased to a torrent . This phenomenon has caused various problem to our society . From my perspective, there are several factors that lead to this issue and a solution should be found as soon as possible .
Personally, i believe that there are two main reasons drove people to live in metropolis . Firstly, urban living offers residents a great opportunities of economic prosperity. In the megalopolis, there is a high number of companies and jobs that offer its employee a fortune remuneration . Therefore, rural residents tend to immigrate to the mega-cities with their strong desire to have a better life . Secondly metropolis is usually a target for big business investment , thus it is invested with various advanced facilities and infrastructures that can ameliorate people living standard . For example , compared to provincial areas the medical services in Hanoi are much more progressive with cutting-edged machines and first rate doctors. Therefore, the demand to receive such a high quality social services drive people to inhabit in urban areas.
However, despite the benefits brought by urban life, i strongly believe that the rocket growth of metropolitan population will result in severe problems to the society. In term of social aspect, the flood of urban residents will contribute to the rise of unemployment rate. When there are excessively high number of job seekers , the need for labourers will no longer be the company top priority as they gradually have insufficient vacancy. Therefore , instead of fulfilling their desire for better life , the rural immigrants are more likely to end up in joblessness. Furthermore , rural residents who come to mega- cities usually failed to gain a fortune earning career since it required a very high level of intellectual abilities. And providing that many rural residents may only possess a beyond average level of academic training, they may only able to do a blue collar works which usually offer a very low salary . Hence , it will alleviate the gap between the rich and the poor in the society. Secondly, the boom of metropolitan population will cause severe harm to the environment . With the crowded inhabitants , the amount of carbon emission will significantly increase in urban areas. According to common biological knowledge, human respiratory system inhales oxy and release carbon dioxide . Therefore , this emission will increase proportionally with the rise of population. Moreover, urbanization will lead to the growing demand for transportation . The private vehicles will increase lead to the higher fuse and smoke released . Consequently, this will lead to serious problems to human physical condition and the air quality
In conclusion, due to many benefits of urban life , many people move to Zmegalopolis to change their life . However, I believe that the drawbacks brought by urbanization are much more significant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2473.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39956331878 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03368030584 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541484716157 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7681051804 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.92 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157563083413 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436539059064 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598394254238 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108840349415 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587853556778 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.