There are many stages of life for example childhood,adolescene,young adulthood and middle age choose one that you consider is the most difficult for man and for women it may be the same one.
Learning is never in ending process and therefore,we learn from womb and tomb. presently,childhood life is most enjoyable stage and their is no any kind of burden on children.where as,in adulthood age people face many difficulty to grow up.here,are the points to clarify the statement.
One school of thought believe that life offers varity of difficulties for every one.To specific,in the age of adulthood were they face many adversity situation to earn "bread and butter"heance,they always searching government job to earn huge amount for their children.moreover,nowdays their is lot of competition in education field because of education is third eye of human being to sets the foundation of successful careier for everyone were as they will become engineer,doctor and teacher for these they have to do hard work to achieve the goal in the life.as a result,youth age give them so many difficulties situation to settel their career
A part from it,childhood is backbone of the society.as u know that in the age of kids there is no any kind of tention because of parents help them to grow their life.additionaly,the age of spring they do not have any burden to build a new house they know that it is only parents responsibality to give them living standard.
To recapitulate,it is rightly said that every coins has two aspect.however the children life is so musch convenient because these period is worryless where as in the adulthood age man and woman become independent.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292592592593 0.247107548796 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.15552993741 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0555555555556 0.0946569551029 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.0501201869031 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0437536398559 152% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137037037037 0.122223957237 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0148148148148 0.0403219363162 37% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.5289861028 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0444444444444 0.0326786765898 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0851851851852 0.0861751148067 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0037037037037 0.0214082191602 17% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0037037037037 0.0119246538136 31% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1591.0 1933.38276553 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 316.052104208 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.54732510288 6.10592293882 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20519365927 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305785123967 0.37474360046 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231404958678 0.284197041944 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169421487603 0.203843217982 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152892561983 0.137313986986 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5289861028 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.560935902166 101% => OK
Word variations: 55.6531852051 60.7401812628 92% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0911823647 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 60.5 20.7725350517 291% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 365.732825981 49.5273876611 738% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 25.8699186992 93.4120437189 28% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 3.93495934959 15.2821509519 26% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.146341463415 0.594174754866 25% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01102204409 559% => Too many language errors. Double check essay format, grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 83.6404958678 49.1922392462 170% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.69127372897 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.336949402736 0.332604825255 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.247628048467 0.102734651613 241% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.129574761811 0.0668474354756 194% => Ideas in sentences are changed often
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.86739602562 0.534917948617 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190143420655 0.148666948902 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205108154192 0.13441755203 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665874698931 0.0742828286743 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33849595811 0.324241079732 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790481724549 0.0640056729886 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2263541844 0.22793763319 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290007553945 0.0582452615562 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.88977955912 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 10.493987976 38% => More topic words wanted.
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 9