Nowadays, it is true that the development of technology such as computer leads to be easy for use and be affordable. This results in the increasing number of people, including employees and graduates, who enjoy spending more time doing at home. Despite some obvious drawbacks of this trend, I would argue that it is more beneficial for individuals.
On the one hand, spending time doing at home has some major drawbacks. Firstly, it is more difficult for companies to manage the time and performance of their work. What I mean by this is that employers would not know exactly what their workers doing in work hours. For example, lazy workers would tend to spend more time relaxing or doing other activities not relating to their major. Secondly, because there are many factors such as family members, babies, employees would be likely to lack concentration completely on their major work. A woman, for instance, with a twelve-month baby needs to take care of her children rather than their work. This can lead to a fact that they have to finish their mass of work at other periods of time, even at night.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantages. One reason for this view is that workers would not waste more time for travelling and could protect them from the risks on the street. Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, is a good example. It often takes about from thirty minutes to an hour to commute to their company regardless of the distance from home to work because of the congestion. Additionally, when travelling on the street, workers would have to cope with pollution and accidents. These never happen if they have the chance to work from home. Another reason is that students could take part in some courses at the same time. This means that students can enter both economics, science and foreign language courses to improve their knowledge and make more chances when graduating.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of working and studying from home with the help of computer technology are much greater than its drawbacks, and this is a positive development.
- The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. 67
- The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. 84
- There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
- The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree? 56
- There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
... for instance, with a twelve-month baby needs to take care of her children rather tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86301369863 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59017008073 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2189463322 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339286165693 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103113325772 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643173806385 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223142223136 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428865740636 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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