Nowadays news papers are witnessed for terrible issues related to smart phones are occured in society related to social,medical and technical problems.This essay absolutely disagree that problems of cellphones are more than their benefits.Apart from this also write some pros and cons with illustration to make my point of view more clearer.
The first and principal pros from mobile phons is people easily get informative knowledge from online sites and also from social networking sites. Furthermore, some social sites provide online tutorials lessons. For instance, You tube, byju's and Facebook provide online coaching for students. In addition, this type of facilities very beneficial for society.
Secondly, in this contemporary era, people use mobile phones for connecting with their family members or friends consequently to create strong bonding. In this busy epoch, where people does not have enough time to meet their relatives, using celephones they easily commute with them. In contrast individuals easily connect with bad peoples consequently women are abused. Moreover, thirdly cosmopolitan cities people easily share their feelings and problems on one site where they get aid from community. On the other hand, Men and women also have some medical problems like if children use mobile phones for playing games as a result they can easily get eyes problems, hearing problems and also brain problems like brain tumor and brain cancer. Apart from sometimes individuals also face technical problem like hanging and sticking mobile phone and virus problems are mainly faced by individuals.
In conclusion, individuals get enormous benefits like getting knowledge, connect with family ,friends or glob. Everything have cons as well as pros it also have but if individuals can take care of that than it can be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48763250883 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6874272511 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8591334747 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3076923077 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227260311927 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075572593382 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601733275945 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112495415745 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781769713239 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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