In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, increasing popularity of car has become one of the controversial questions requiring immediate attention both from general public and from government alike. In what comes next, I will make an attempt to briefly discuss what can we do to reduce car use by people.
As to my mind, I truly believe that if mass media told everywhere how it is substantial for a human body to move as much as possible, people would prefer bicycles rather than cars to commute. As it is more comfortable to travel by car or by public transport than going on foot, people do not think about harmful consequences of sedentary lifestyle. That is why they must be informed about it by local authority or by TV. For example, when TV and radio started to tell how smoking is hurtful, the quantity of smokers significantly decreased.
I also think that government must worry about this issue. If they equip cycle routes, the number of cyclists will increase. In addition to this, because of loss of bicycle parking, there is a huge problem of bicycle theft. For instance, I personally would like to commute on a bike, but I am afraid that my bike would be stolen.
To conclude, personally, I adhere to a view, that people should be just explained that vast majority of car journeys are for less than two miles, that is, distances that can be easily be covered on foot. This way, such journeys can be useful not only for environment, but also for all of your body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...requiring immediate attention both from general public and from government alike. In what come...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71374045802 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69064478748 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4141004222 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214004859887 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639354820728 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609263007225 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123722811671 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777387526745 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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