There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Global warming is the side effect of man-made activities as there are many pieces of evidence regarding this. Nowadays, In spite of doing something for mother nature, human beings are only concerned with themselves and their lives. In this essay, I will be talking about what humans are doing against mother nature and causing a rise in global temperature and after that, I will be explaining some solutions regarding this problem.
Notwithstanding many people have altruistic behavior for the environment, others are destroying by their malign habits. Most of the causes for heating earth are factory pollution, deforestation, use of plastic, excessive usage of an air-conditioner and etc. The effects are drastic when many activities are held in a short period of time. For example, during the festive season in India especially Diwali, loads of fireworks creates a gargantuan cloud of pollution above the major cities, and because of that mess, the temperature of the complete region is affected. There are many other causes present from different regions and nations which can create drastic side effects in the environment, and because of these human activities, global temperature is compromised.
Although many think that the problem can be untangled, it is more about the mentality of the majority of people. If everyone takes a small step regarding mother nature, we can actually solve the issue. For instance, the government of India established a law that one has to limit the number of firecrackers to stop the pollution and the good thing was that many took this law very seriously and did not burst even a single firecracker. The pollution, deforestation and other malign humans activities can be stopped if we work it together.
To conclude, man-made activities are responsible for the rise in global temperature and it can be stopped using various strategies either by the government or by human themselves. From my perspective, human activities can be controlled, if we make everyone more aware about the environment and its unpleasant effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
..., excessive usage of an air-conditioner and etc. The effects are drastic when many activ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...hen many activities are held in a short period of time. For example, during the festive season...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, regarding, so, as to, for example, for instance, talking about, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26283987915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94609183599 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552870090634 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9005643909 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273478210183 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920902232173 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909446133181 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179279048545 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103956643097 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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