In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The people with an enormous amount of salary are considered respectable by many citizens in small countries. However, many believe that the wage should not go above a certain level and the government of a country should take appropriate measures to limit it. From my perspective, there is no harm to a country if people earn an extreme amount. This paragraph contains both sides of the topic.
The economy of the country depends upon the millionaires and the people who are earning handsomely. Unlike typical citizen, these people do not save money in their bank account. Instead, they spend an immense amount of money on businesses and stocks. Therefore, the economy of the country is maintained because of the constant flow of the money. Moreover, the citizens are provided with more services and facilities within the state because of the better growth.
If the government started limiting the salary of high-end employees and owners, then in some way the economy of the country will drastically decrease. Although, the flow of the wage will increase initially, after a few days there will be exhaustion because people will start saving money into their bank accounts. Ultimately, no one will be able to spend an extreme amount of money in businesses. It is widely known that giant companies require a massive amount of money to run and it is responsible for the country's growth and economy.
In conclusion, the country's growth is dependent on the corporations and large agencies which are handled by highly skilled employees. In my opinion, the small number of people who earn extremely high salaries are beneficial for a country and its people itself. Therefore, the government should not restrict people to receive high wages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69765158509 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4015335285 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264616312561 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898706954834 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833105409733 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178177659044 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105460152915 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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