There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
While leaving on the earth Humans invented so many things in bulk, but in return we have to pay the price in form of natural disasters like global warming. Day by day temperature of earth surface gets increased and it's all due to man-made activities. In this essay we will discuss reason behind it and how can we prevent from getting worst.
Humans leaving on the earth since past thousands of years, whenever they find any problem in their life, they try to solve it using surrounded objects. For Example, when we are facing problems for shelters, first human start to leave in caves than they start making house using woods, after that they start using cement and metals to build more secure and strong house. This way human started use of wood but in return they don't plant trees as much they use, so bio-cycle gets interrupted, due to this reason temperature starts rising. And that's where global warming gets started. This is just one example of causes, there are many more causes for water-cycle, air-pollution and soil pollution.
To stop this situation getting worse, we have to awake people minds, provide knowledge and information how to use nature resources. Make use of as much as renewable energy like by setting up solar panels on roof of house, make as much dam as possible, use wind power to generate energy, also hydro-power plants in oceans are make electricity. By using all these renewable resources, we can control global warming effect. Not only this, but we have to reduce crude-oil and nuclear material usages. For instance, we must stop using plastic bags, plastic is one of material which do not get recycled.
To conclude, Problems gets solve only by who created them. We must understand, how sensitive environment resources and start using them wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89802631579 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44615667512 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7449395397 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167632887414 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598644587843 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354776474948 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105420538522 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443923032012 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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