It is undeniable that a rapid growth of global population has led to many spatial problems. One of which is the lack of cities’ capability to accommodate high volume of people that often results in unplanned cities. This phenomenon, however, have disadvantages for urban people in many ways. Therefore, this essay will explain in detail the importance of well-planned cities to prevent non-rural related problems occur.
A livable city that is carefully planned can make people living in it have a good quality of health. As a matter of fact, most unorganized cities which have severe congestion often make people suffer from several health issues, namely stress, asthma and high blood pressure. If the government knows how to manage traffic properly and enact appropriate traffic regulations, these kind of problems will not happen. Thus, urban citizens can live physically and mentally healthier because they do not have to face heavy traffic every single day.
Another reason is by having a thorough scheme, a city is able to poses less risk of environmental problems. One cannot deny that air, water and land pollution that is now happening in many metropolitan areas mostly occur not only because of vehicle emission but also industrial activities. Some local governments are unlikely to carefully plan about disposal sites in the first place. Hence, now as the cities grow, factories and household waste are mixed up and scattered, causing potential detrimental effects on inhabitants. All of these cases are proofs that make a long-term plan for a city is essential.
To sum up, it is likely true that planning cities’ development in a careful way is important because by carrying out this, citizens can have better life. Moreover, potential risks such as health and environmental problems due to mismanagement of cities can also be lowered.
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion 83
- In today s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge In the future job applicants may not need any formal qualifications To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
- There has been a huge increase in the sizes of the cities Many cities have grown in an haphazard way Why is careful planning important in the development of cities 92
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... enact appropriate traffic regulations, these kind of problems will not happen. Thus, urba...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a careful way" with adverb for "careful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... that planning cities' development in a careful way is important because by carrying out th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25418060201 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85616379334 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0321696882 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276691008998 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900409168293 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645667115254 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172632243347 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380751121856 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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