There have been many inventors in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that the internet plays the most vital role in the history of humanity. There are good arguments both for and against this view, but I believe it depends on different reasons.
I completely agree with the idea that the internet is regarded as an important discovery in human history. The most prominent justification is that we can make the most of the internet in order to seek out any information which is necessary for our work and study at any time. It is due to the fact that as long as the internet was exploded, it created the platform for searching such as Google, which is the most ubiquitous search engine these days. Secondly, the network places importance on accessing the enormous sources of knowledge from all over the world since most of the knowledge from all realms can be uploaded and shared on the web. Finally, there would be a case that only when the internet was invented, would people have the ability to connect with others in a straightforward manner. For example, Facebook and Twitter are two of the most prevalent social networks which meet the need of keeping in touch with friends and family.
However, I believe that the internet does not always have positive effects on human beings. Firstly, the more people access the internet, the more they are addicted to it as there is always attractive information which can distract them. Furthermore, regardless of the amount of up-to-minute information updated constantly, there is always distorted and exaggerated news which leads us to misunderstand of our society. Last but not least, the final reason could be the online sites are the key factors influencing the rate of crime, especially youth crime. This is owing to the fact that the news on violence and offence started to burst out only when the internet occurred. For instance, statistics showed that the primary reason for youth crime stems from misleading awareness of the young generation.
In conclusion, while reasons can be given to justify that the most significant invention of history is the internet, I believe this is not an accurate statement under any circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a straightforward manner" with adverb for "straightforward"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...have the ability to connect with others in a straightforward manner. For example, Facebook and Twitter are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94428969359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7215981461 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532033426184 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2244876595 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205352128183 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700487515324 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594547070183 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115207687029 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495651900894 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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