It is true that among all the inventions throughout history, internet plays a vital role in our society. There are good arguments both for and against this view, but I believe it depends on different reasons.
I completely agree with the idea that the most crucial invention is the internet. The first prominent justification is that the online network is the key factor in free access to information because all forms of information can be digitized and transferred through the interconnected wired network with about a third of light velocity. As a result, the second point is that the internet revolutionizes the way we communicate. Our communication nowadays are less influenced by distance, hence, the delay is negligible. For example, there are many methods of exchanging message, such as email, chat applications and social networks. Most of them can provide real-time text by using "Websockets".
However, I believe internet may not be the most important invention due to the fact that there are some disadvantages that have negative effects on social development. Firstly, the net neutrality which protects users from censorship and information regulation is a contributing factor in the spread of misleading information and propaganda. Secondly, big data provided by the internet gives rise to machine learning and artificial intelligence. Unfortunately, like other tools, these technologies can be used to exploit people, undermine their privacy and may lead to catastrophic effect on society. For instance, an experiment conducted by Facebook shown that user emotion and mood can be influenced by news they saw.
In conclusion, while reasons can be given to justify that internet is the most substantial invention in human history, I believe this is not an accurate statement under any circumstances.
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 78
- Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- There have been many inventors in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45070422535 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32225727094 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0204039151 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173578347649 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563909446769 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615112153836 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105761331903 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380491067792 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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