THERE IS AN INCREASING TREND AROUND THE WORLD TO HAVE A SMALL FAMILY RATHER THAN A LARGE FAMILY.
WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF HAVING A SMALL FAMILY RATHER THAN A LARGE FAMILY?
In the contemporary world, the size of family is decreasing even though the rate of global population is soaring. The current trend of socities is to have a family with fewer members unlike earlier days when a family includes parents, children and grand parents. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of it.
As far as the benefits of it are concerned the far-reaching effect is the cost. Compared to the larger family, a small family needs a lot less money to survive since the smaller family has a fewer members. The family budget design to comply with the demand of every individual as the number of people is less, their need can be easily affordable. In Brisbane, for instance, a family of 4 can live on the salary of only one person of the family. Another positive aspect is offered by it, is the amount of time it demands. Unlike earlier days, when family size was relatively larger, the smaller family of mordern days has more time to spend. As the majority of time is consumed to manage them and to provide basic needs. It means they do not have time to fun, the small family trend has very admiring feature is the time that can be used to enjoy with family.
On the other side, this movement has been criticised by many due to the number of drawbacks associated with it. The prime worrying reason is the support. A small family unit has been complaining about the level of stress which seems like unmanageable, due to the lack of support. For example the younger kids can be looked after by the older siblings hence the reponsibility is shared between parents and children. Secondly the threatning concern for the majority of the nuclear families is the risk of isolation. This movement of family offers freedom and convenience even though it suffers a lot due to loneliness. I born and brought up in joint family hence I have never experienced such a feeling. However, after moving to Australia, where I live with my husband, I often feel isolated. Thus the smaller families have contentious issues to confront which are the lack of support and a feeling of isolation.
Overall it is clear that the way we used to have a family unit has been changed. Instead of more family members, now the size of it is getting smaller and smaller. This change has definitely delivered advantages such as low maintenance and low stress level. However, the lack of support and isolation are the challenging issues that come with this trend.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71064814815 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52500250411 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0490989394 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7916666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282738176161 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778348933861 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707170302064 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180496961915 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353659327943 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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