It is said that many married pairs in every corner of the world tend to avoid having children, and this trend has triggered both merits and drawbacks.
Refusing to give birth brings couples loads of benefits on account of some reasons. Firstly, this phenomenon is attributable to the decrease in the amount of residents in a nation; at a result, overpopulation is able to be tackled. In addition, the lesser citizens does a country have, the lesser pollution does the environment bare. Secondly, people will not be under economical pressure, with no money being allocated to school or other children's services. A telling example is the increase in the tuition that parents have to pay for their children, so not giving birth may let them free of this amount of money.
On the other hand, such the fall in the amount of young individuals also cause lots of problems to the country and residents. The first disadvantage is the lack of workforce because many occupations require flexible and creative thinking which can only be seen in the young generation. Moreover, the number of senior citizens might cause financial burden, for the government has to spend money on services for the old such as insurance, entertainment while the number of young people are not enough to meet that standard. The second negative aspect of not having children is the loneliness that people have to face with when they get older. Having no children, individuals have to do anything themselves and be on the verge of depression. For example, a hospital has shown that most of the old people having depression do not have children.
In conclusion, having no children have both positive and negative effects on individual's life, but this situation also depend on the circumstances of each family.
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING OUT ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LINE IN WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS HOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS 78
- Governments around the world are spending billions in support of space programs This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
- Gender equality has not been achieved in our society Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e both positive and negative effects on individuals life, but this situation also depend on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96979865772 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75755837516 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3147969933 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230808737696 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797546285159 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584873097534 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13959398157 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027864049792 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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