It is very easy to travel by car, therefore public transport will going to face absolute hard time in upcoming future. In my opinion, I agree that travelling by car brings lots of benefit and convenience so people prefer it as a mean of transport instead of bus or train.
Firstly, most people use car nowadays as a transport mean to avoid delay and to reach their destination on time. In other words, there is no need to wait long at bus stop or train station to get public transport but people can use car to get quick access any time. For instance, some people do night shifts at work and its not easy to get bus or other mode of transport in late hours, therefore people prefer car to avoid expected delay to reach home.
Another point to consider is that, car is becoming more reliable in terms of privacy and security as compare to public transport ; for example, people sometime discuss work related matter in car that can not be reveal in front of others for security reason so car is the better option in regards of privacy. Furthermore, travelling with family in car is much secure than other mean of transport because overcrowded public transport are always at risk of atrocious terror attacks, this, then, making it's future dark.
Finally, weather is another important factor to decide the mode of transport as it varies from tropical to temperate countries and people choose convenient way according to weather condition. Moreover, car is always on preference in very hot, cold or rainy weather and people avoid to use public transport in extreme appalling weather conditions.
In conclusion, these days people prefer car for their convenience, safety purposes and avoid execrable temperature changes and these all factors putting future of public transport at risk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...by car, therefore public transport will going to face absolute hard time in upcoming ...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...rity reason so car is the better option in regards of privacy. Furthermore, travelling with f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89144736842 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55460968387 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6615609339 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.7 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31686601308 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131787140933 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593068879184 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176896650173 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782865335555 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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