“There’s a big number of people who wish to live in big cities”
Write an essay to educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.
It is popularly said that some big cities are extremely populated because a large number of rural people are creating a wave of migration into more developed areas. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that living in modern cities would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that people are likely to get more career opportunities than in rural areas. In other words, big cities can support residents much more chances of their jobs so that people may earn more money and manage to have better living condition. Another reason is that it would help to considerably improve standard of people’s life. It is clear that in big cities, there are many material and spiritual condition. It becomes easier for people to seek surrounding entertainment parks, supermarkets and big central to satisfy their dairy activities.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First of all, because of too much people living in the same place, the pollution is one of the drawbacks. It is likely that people go to the cities for better jobs, which means there are more and more factories arise as well. As a result, pollution from smokes, wastewater, toxic pollutants in big cities is unavoidable. Secondly, citizens in cities would face up with the problem of traffic jam. In other words, rural people are flocking to the city and cover all the left space so that there may not enough lands to widen roads. Especially, in the rush hours, there are too much people coming out on the streets for working or to go home. It is therefore no wonder that settlers may suffer from heavily traffic jam in the metropolis.
In conclusion, there are plus points to living in the big cities regarding to job opportunities and better living condition. However, the downside may emerge consequently in terms of pollution and traffic jam if the number of people moving into central areas continues to rise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... cities are extremely populated because a large number of rural people are creating a wave of mig...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...uld arise. First of all, because of too much people living in the same place, the po...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ially, in the rush hours, there are too much people coming out on the streets for wo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60136376265 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.946377225 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72222222222 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228852741497 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702480894756 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546002301022 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143832126142 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055566895936 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.