there should be laws to limit the amount and type of violence shown on TV. what extent do you agree or disagree?
For the past few decades, with the development of social media, there is an upsurge in the number of violent programs shown on TV. This situation can cause a lot of challenging problems in the society, which results to the idea of enforcing strict laws with the aim of limiting violence on TV. In my perspective, I totally agree with this motion.
To commence with, there is no doubt that violent shows on TV on a daily basis is highly likely to exert a profound impact on people as well as the community. In all probability, individuals especially children and adolescents will develop a propensity for aggression and brutality proceeding from watching TV. This is the main reason for an incremental number of juvenile delinquency, which can have detrimental influence on the socio- economic development of the nation. In addition to that, exposure to violence can lead to desensitization in the society when people fail to come forward to against injustice due to the phobia of being retaliated. Therefore, implementing regulations aiming at restricting offensive programs definitely can diminish the number of crimes and build a better society.
Apart from that, TV watcher can reap a lot of benefits from this policy. Parents will no longer have to worry about the excessively violent programming which their kids might be exposed to every day. Furthermore, the significant limit on violent TV shows result in the provisions of other useful entertainment or education programs. Not only so they do good to parents and children, but also the whole society will be a civilized environment with a potential young generations. The government also needs to take proactive measures to formulate and subsequently bring in laws to violence on social network.
To recapitulate, I whole- heartedly believe this policy will create a better future.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04148355613 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3683243503 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148650924101 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485815008284 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036307129323 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834706345732 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595883494538 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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