There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it by examples.
A tumultuous sound and street uproar are virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now, however, almost everywhere people can hear the noise and sound. This phenomenon is a tremendous obstacle for society. In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solution to it.
Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle. One of the main sources of the noise is a transport. Traditionally, people who prefer to buy a car are rising day by day. As a result, the car signals create a street noise. Another contributing factor is the overpopulation and tourism. In the new era, cities and villages populations’ are rising up. Moreover, a tourist influx has a huge impact on the city lifestyle. Consequently, a lot of people who stroll at the street or have a dinner at the café can set up the enormous noise in the area. More importantly, city entertainments and live concerts create a loud atmosphere and interfere people to sleep.
In order to resolve this sense of the matter, I believe government must first address its root cause. Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for authority to cut down car number and increase transport tax and gas price. Moreover, the state has to propagandize the bicycles. Admittedly, such methods would probably not fully solve this problem, however, it would at least soften the matter. One further measure that supermarkets, restaurants, entertainment centers, live concert scenes should be moved to suburbs and all city cafes have to close at night.
In conclusion, I believe that this is a clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term. However, I reaffirm that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'transport'.
Suggestion: transport
...One of the main sources of the noise is a transport. Traditionally, people who prefer to bu...
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Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have dinner'.
Suggestion: have dinner
...t of people who stroll at the street or have a dinner at the café can set up the enormous noi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, as to, at least, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88870597712 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9505868491 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134310067822 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346241840273 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353255491028 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775815562323 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283940195802 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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