There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.
There is a tendency of growing numbers of consumer products, which causes environmental issues. This essay will suggest that the principal cause of this trend is the comfort and ease rendered by these products and submit a government education program as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main cause of this trend being popular is the comfort and effortlessness provided by the consumer products. Convenience products such as microwave ovens, washing machines, dishwashers, have become a ubiquitous part of the contemporary lifestyle. Nowadays, life is very hectic because of overwork and cut-throat competition. Consumer products save our time and they act as stress busters too. For example, when I was a kid my mother used to wash clothes by hand which is a very cumbersome process, currently she uses a washing machine which saves her valuable time.
The most practical solution to this problem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the devastating repercussions of overuse of consumer products and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public. This raised awareness of the problem would lead many people to switch to conventional products which are less dangerous for our environment. For example, the Bhutan government lobbied their denizens to stop using those consumer goods which are detrimental for the environment; this initiative resulted in decreased sales of certain consumer products.
To summarize, extensive use of consumer goods has been caused by people’s proclivity for a pleasurable and tension-free life and states should retrench this by educating men and women to put a cap on the use of consumer products.
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| 2018-08-01 | IELTS TUBER | 90 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3536121673 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04141632234 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1530154888 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227674232802 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831127763635 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608925723493 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138899012367 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412312578825 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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