Owing to innovation in technology and teaching sector,online learning classes have becoming a frequent phenomenon in all over the globe rather than physical lectures.Although,Some student uphold it as a positive trend whilst other have reservations about it.From my Point of view, it could be a positive development which undoubtedly affect the society.
To embark on, with regards to positive development one of the prominent benefits is,Internet based coursing may reduce the time and money expenditure as student do not need money for travel allowance and also can save the time of commuting.To illustrate:- students can attend the classes from anywhere around the globe it only requires internet connection.Moreover.online courses also offers the time flexibility as students may manage their classes according to their time availability.On the top of it, this trend also convenient for those who are doing work with their studies.A survey conducted by times of India has revealed, 65 percent of workers have been enrolling online courses to enhance their skills with their work.Hence,we should be thankful for this invention which really offer numerous opportunities for the society
In contrast, other people hold the notion that university bases courses have some benefits which are highly appreciable.Physical lectures may help to motivate and enhance the confidence level among students.Furthermore.face to face interaction helps to intensify the communication and intellectual skills.To exemplify:_ pupils can talk with their classmates who have several abilities which may provide tremendous amount of knowledge of various cultures and traditions.In addition,the presence of teacher would create the atmosphere of fear and pressure towards learning between students
To conclude, after gauging both the aspects, I opine that online based courses are more convenient and relaxing approach for the development of the society.this trend will support and facilitate human endeavor in the foreseeable future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83445945946 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56428845769 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 148.0 20.2975951904 729% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 654.0 49.4020404114 1324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 863.5 106.682146367 809% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 148.0 20.7667163134 713% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 40.5 7.06120827912 574% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210259849755 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139705857769 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631122208188 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113114018443 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319890916133 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 80.0 13.0946893788 611% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -95.66 50.2224549098 -190% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 63.4 11.3001002004 561% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.72 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.42 8.58950901804 191% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 61.2 10.1190380762 605% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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