Luminaries have been given paramount importance across the world since beginning.However, an argument put forth by some short signed people that celebrities make hefty sum of money in comparison to politicians.From my point of view,it could be a positive development which undoubtedly affect society.
To embark on,celebrities earn more money due to their talent and creativity,which they performs in front of the society.By doing so, they influence their fans and get full support from the society.Moreover, owing to innovation in technology and film industries, film makers are getting huge amount of money from producers as they are executing several risky tasks which may snatch their lives.On a particular note,mostly superstars are executing businesses and sponsoring numerous products for earning money.To exemplify,Salman khan,a popular actor of Bollywood cinema diversified his own business in various organisations.
Furthermore,after earning enough money,celebrities always become apart of charity, they mostly donate money and help destitute people to finish the poverty from the society.To illustrate,Angelina Jolie who adopts orphans and poor children.she always perform humanitarian activities to develop the nation.Due to these event,my sentiments have been swayed in to the side of celebrities
On the other hand, politics is not an earning driven profession.Politician ought to involve more and more social activities and help the poor people.In addition, they should not think about high wages as they usually get everything from the government according to their needs.Dr.Abdul Kalam Azad is a good illustration of this as he sacrifice his life for the development of his country.
After contemplating the subjected matter, I can conclude the vision that celebrities are making money because of their creative skills and tasks.this trend may provide a versatile development for the society.
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- Many people these days have computer laptops telephones at their home for work Do you think working from home has more advantages or disadvantages Give reasons 89
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 92
- Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians What are the reasons for this Is it a positive or negative development 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84341637011 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57491687289 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658362989324 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.329851078 49.4020404114 468% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.5 106.682146367 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.75 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233607255119 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133676835727 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374713267857 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123094113195 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175651711308 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 13.0946893788 315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.49 50.2224549098 -33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.0 11.3001002004 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.78 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.39 8.58950901804 144% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.7795591182 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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