These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
These days the development of technical transportation and opened diplomatic policy of countries in the world contribute the significant role in the circulation of human flows. The advantages of this process are undeniable, however, people who live abroad facing many challenges and difficulties in their life.
On the one hand, I have a comprehension of why many people desire to study and live in other countries because of their benefit. Settle in other countries can put more chance into the pockets of foreign language improvement. Contacting with indigenous people and flooding in the local environment are the perfect condition to foster language skills. Besides, the exploring of new unique culture acts as an essential role of living aboard. The cultural exchange includes many aspects of culinary, history, literality can massively extend knowledge and experience in life issues.
On the other hand, those people who live aboard currently facing many challenges and difficulties. The calculation of cost living quite a serious problem because people living aboard must estimate the reasonable expenses which can be more dominant than there own country.
Furthermore, many people cannot harmonize and create establish effective communication with local people. These difficulties can put them in trouble to construct a life stability and developmental career.
In conclusion, with many advantages and disadvantages, the choice of living in a foreign country is a concordant resolution for many people who desire for a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57872340426 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05303654437 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3699412797 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358045314595 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125488412542 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079370513312 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195793737572 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520021646215 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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