These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons behind this ? Is it a positive or negative development ?
Nowadays, more fathers stay at home to do house works and take care of their children. However, mothers go out from home to do work for earning more. I postulate this trend as a positive development and reasons behind this are explained in the coming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are various reasons which are explained that number of females do work out rather than take care of children and house. First of all, this makes females more independent and they have their own choices. They have no need to take money from their husbands when they work out from home for learning. Secondly, this also overcomes the gender base discrimination and gives a full right to women to do job in any field. Lastly, the reason is that men understand more about their house and their children and feel that how their wives take care of them and their family.
In addition, this leads to a development and there are numerous reasons for that. Firstly, this leads to overcome inequality between men and women in the society. As, when females do work outside and their husband stay at home which leads to more understanding between husband and wife and they their partners situation. Moreover, if females do work more in every field then this will also lead to the development of their nation and economy which shows women empowerment. Because, females do all work in a well manner and with more responsibility. Apart from that, this also give opportunity to women to stand on their own feet because in any situation in which they need money, they are able to manage it by them-self. As a result, this makes females more independent.
To conclude, doing job outside the house in any field by women has become a positive development. Although, men do work to earn money, but there are plethora of benefits and development when females also do work out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74143302181 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51495464093 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473520249221 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9494939595 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5294117647 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345428228805 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132856609731 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915045406454 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262565728299 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151855892479 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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