These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while
mothers go out to work. Do you think it is a
positive or negative development?
In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of men staying at home and taking the role of househusband while women become the primary breadwinners. In my opinion, this development brings both positive and negative effects
On the positive side, the trend shows progression in modern society when men and women enjoy equal rights. In the past, fathers had to provide financial security to their families, while mothers stayed at home and took care of their children so they had little chance at work. But now, women are free from housework, childcare, and join social activities. And they have the ability to make a great contribution to the development of society and the economy. Meanwhile, men having the desire to care for their families or they are not good at earning money because of a lack of necessary skills or being disabled can choose to become stay-at-home dads. They can help to alter perceptions of masculinity, caregiving and fatherhood and redefine social expectations and norms about housework and babysitting. Moreover, being a stay-at-home dad also brings advantages in bringing up children. Because of their father's strictness, children can become more disciplined and mature.
On the negative side, many men staying at home have to face criticism and negative judgments from those who believe that childcare and housework responsibilities should be the jobs of women. Other family members may disapprove when children are being raised mainly by their father so stay-at-home dads are at higher risk of mental illness such as isolation or depression. Moreover, they may get less support because many resources or parent education are primarily designed for mothers and uncomfortable or impossible to join. So their children may have emotional and behavioral problems if they are not nurtured properly. The final negative effect is that stay-at-home dads may struggle financially since it is hard for them to return to the job market in the future.
In conclusion, families with stay-at-home dads need to welcome both positive and negative effects to meet the challenges of the modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25072886297 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89869528579 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559766763848 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6130794477 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333821193936 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111700794894 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774275645055 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205234736202 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443783704791 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.