Nowadays, it’s quite common for people to move from one job to another several times during their life. For many, especially unsatisfied employees, resigning their current position and get a new one is a great opportunity to get a better quality of life. However, there are both pros and cons in doing so. In this essay, I am going to discuss about the advantages of changing your current job, as well as the challenges to be overcome.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of working for another company. You will have the opportunity to get a better job that offers more satisfaction. I...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and make you more rounded as a person. On the other hand, the major problem of ...
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Line 9, column 320, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'why'?
Suggestion: why
...l that it is the right time to move on, the why do we stay?
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Discourse Markers used:
['apparently', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18925831202 0.247107548796 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.161125319693 0.15552993741 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117647058824 0.0946569551029 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0690537084399 0.0437536398559 158% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112531969309 0.122223957237 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0460358056266 0.0403219363162 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71436593396 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332480818414 0.0326786765898 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00255754475703 0.00163938923432 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971867007673 0.0861751148067 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255754475703 0.0214082191602 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0076726342711 0.0119246538136 64% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2023.0 1933.38276553 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 316.052104208 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71468926554 6.10592293882 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20519365927 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28611898017 0.37474360046 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237960339943 0.284197041944 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172804532578 0.203843217982 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1388101983 0.137313986986 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71436593396 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529745042493 0.560935902166 94% => OK
Word variations: 57.0498659153 60.7401812628 94% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0911823647 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8095238095 20.7725350517 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9203384542 49.5273876611 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.590909091 93.4120437189 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.820855615 15.2821509519 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.898395721925 0.594174754866 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 40.6055578039 49.1922392462 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.24770642202 1.69127372897 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.28654825564 0.332604825255 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0995255365676 0.102734651613 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0513776039806 0.0668474354756 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475458252789 0.534917948617 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107195594739 0.148666948902 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963222919277 0.13441755203 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600167818931 0.0742828286743 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.244517027054 0.324241079732 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0762375973875 0.0640056729886 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178944270364 0.22793763319 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074198298307 0.0582452615562 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41883767535 205% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 14.0 5.88977955912 238% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.60220440882 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.00200400802 300% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.493987976 191% => OK
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9