thought on Joel Brinkley's article
Even though I have many concerns with your article, now I would just point out one of those that you said people see almost no wild or domestic animal at all in Vietnam. First, that conclusion was made after 10 days for holiday in Vietnam, which I collected from one of your interview, that makes me wonder have you put your feet to every city in Vietnam. Second, 3 examples from that article about no birds, squirrels and dogs, those are very few to represent “ almost no wild or domestic animals”. Third, even with just those 3 examples, I have doubts about them. Talking about squirrels, Vietnam has 19 species of squirrels, variants of the ground and tree-dwelling types, found in the central regions, but you won't see them much as they are night creatures. If you really want to see them, you should go to that certain places at certain time. Talking about birds, according to Country ranking Red List of Threatened Birds Species of United Nations Environmental Program, Vietnam ranked 22 while US ranked 9. The last one, dog is one of the most favorite pet in Vietnam, Vietnamese people usually take them for a walk in the parks in the late afternoon or very early in the morning. As you can see, maybe your schedule just didn’t fit to see these 3 animals. Last thing, your sentence “you don’t have to spend much time in Vietnam before you notice something unusual” might change to “you don’t have to spend much time to research,write and check an article”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1475, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , write
...os;t have to spend much time to research,write and check an article'.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, third, well, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7816091954 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6497680981 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0527616943 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0200477072152 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00757671403078 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159745201568 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0200477072152 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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