Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society？
It is true that most people in the world have dream to live in an ideal society and been searching for achieving this perfection. In my opinion, there are uncountable indicators created in a way to meet people's need and this essay will discuss these factors and the way to reach lifegoal achievement.
To begin with, several aspects should be taken into consideration in the way to build perfect society. One of the number one leading point is preserving human right. To be more specific, a reasonable public welfare system is the foundation of stable society by played an insurrance for individua...
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It is said that a perfect
It is said that a perfect society is the ideal place to live in. However, it is difficult to define an ideal society as it is viewed in varied ways. This essay will discuss the most essential key element of an ideal society and different attitudes of individuals toward achieving it.
An ideal soceity comprises of numerous factors such as access to education, equal rights for men and women, provision of employment for members of society, high quality standard of living, low crime rates, low morbidity and low mortality rate. However, I find education is the most important element for an ideal nation.
With free access to education, the literacy rate would increase in society and its members would be defined, producing more professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. There would also be more skilled workers. Because of this, it would attract local and foreign investors which would create jobs. If employment is high, it would improve the quality of life of every individual and family in the community.
The health sector would improve and the public would have knowledge in terms of health care. This would lower the number of illnesses and deaths in society.
Low crime rates would also be attained as people tend to commit crimes and other wrongdoings due to poverty. Given the same benefits for both gender, it would develop a fair, unbiased community. There would be opportunities for women to improve themselves and pursue a career which could help them especially those single mothers who struggle to raise their children.
In a nutshell, all the elements given are interlinked with one another but generally, education plays a vital role in the shaping of an ideal society. To help achieve this, each individual has his own duty and obligation to obey the laws of the government and be aware of his surroundings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
...true that most people in the world have dream to live in an ideal society and been se...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ments to achieve the such perfect goal. Its an essential parts to fulfill peoples m...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his dream. At first, the authorities can held a survey every week in order to col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, still, apart from, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00660066007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8859079212 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.798499903 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230508655444 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752464161423 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636443177637 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133334244174 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593286605214 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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