In this assay, I will discuss about the variety aspects of having a society with highest standards. In fact, nobody can not deny the ambitious of living in perfect society. Indeed, this Idea is the biggest mankind's hope. Although, there is different measures according the levels of human's needs and expectations.
obviously, there are many factors such as education, health, freedom, peace, safety issue and more. which I believe all of them are fundamental of a good society that always we are looking for them. By the way, The statistic show us educated persons can make better population in compare with others.
For example, when the individuals access to the enormous of information and knowledge by going to school and university, definitely they will grow better children that not only we would be faced with an educated population in future but also the governments can lead them with less challenge. In this case, The people will have better understanding of each other due to respectful and responsible attitude that may prevent of violence and unreasonable actions.
To sum up, I believe For approaching to our goals and have a better future we have to gain more knowledge in different fields to according our talent and capability to form a society with all standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...the variety aspects of having a society with highest standards. In fact, nobody can not deny...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are different measures'?
Suggestion: there are different measures
...is the biggest mankinds hope. Although, there is different measures according the levels of humans needs an...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...ls of humans needs and expectations. obviously, there are many factors such as educati...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... freedom, peace, safety issue and more. which I believe all of them are fundamental o...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to form a society with all standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for example, in fact, such as, by the way, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10798122066 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77056569973 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4153441251 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171037556547 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599975677526 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543883935704 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101028250612 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377619245724 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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