Today, fewer elderly people live with their children than in the past. Do u think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is true that in the modern day, the old people have a tendency for choosing to live alone compared to in the past. In my opinion, I believe that this trend has both advantages and disadvantages for both generations.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why elderly people who do not live with their children have become far more normal in recent years. Firstly, concerning the older generation, they will not be affected by the young people’s lifestyles such as eating too much sweet food, getting up late and making noises. Therefore, they will have a better life without youngsters. Secondly, in terms of the younger generation, especially when they finish high school, they will be mature enough to live more independent than those who live with family members. They have to seek a job to earn a living and gain countless opportunities to develop their soft skills like how to cook, cleaning clothes and the way to protect themselves.
On the other hand, I suppose that there are some negative consequences which should be considered. From an individual perspective, young people will miss the golden chances to obtain a lot of real experience of their parents in regard to lifestyles, physical appearance and doing housework. For instance, my sister has a happy life with her parents -in -law, because she was learning many skills to manage conflicts or how to narrow the relationships between family members by her mothers. In addition, the oldsters will face some problems when they live alone, particularly health risks. As a person who has heart attack live without relatives, it is not safe for him/her when emergencies occur; thus; her/his offsprings will not only regret but also experience a hard time in the near future.
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will bring both benefits and drawbacks for individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in regard to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00964630225 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78195818873 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7935940328 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6153846154 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201722439411 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642990920163 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642021610603 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959886340217 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673592637803 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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