In recent years, advertising and marketing play a huge role for companies. Some people believe that the because of advertising, the sales of product or goods become high and these types of products are not the actual needs for society. This essay will discuss why people are buying goods just because of the advertising rather than their needs.
Nowadays, a number of famous persons are influencing people for buying products. Moreover, some people will purchase when their favourite actor acts in the advertisements. For example, there are plenty of companies who are hiring the popular celebrities like Puma brand have collaborated with Virat Kohli. As a result, a lot of his fans are just purchasing the goods what they do not need. In short, the high sals of popular goods because of the promotion and they are actually not the real needs.
There are so many innovative advertisements are available which are affected to customers. Furthermore, the way of representing an any advertisement is make a huge difference in the sales. For instance, some of companies are promoting their products like real world experience. That is why, so many people are easily attracted. However, sometimes they do not advertise their product in a good way so they will loose their buyers. Overall, because of the different styles of advertisements will be attracted by people and these unwanted goods are sold.
It is increasingly likey that the growth of sales of consume goods definitely reflect the advertisements. However, there are plenty of products are sold which are not needed for society. Ultimately, a number of individuals will buy products because of the advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the companies') or simply say ''some companies''.
Suggestion: some of the companies; some companies
... difference in the sales. For instance, some of companies are promoting their products like real ...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...heir product in a good way so they will loose their buyers. Overall, because of the d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17279411765 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95088242256 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3708374141 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7647058824 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241400754763 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07981310275 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694074410708 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153041746344 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205783039843 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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