Today in many countries people are living in a “throwaway” society where things are used for a short time then thrown away. What do you think is the cause and what problems will it lead to?
In various nations these days, people are living in a “throwaway” society where people use their objects for a short period then quickly discard them. I will elaborate the main causes and possible effects of this situation in my essay.
In my point of view, the foremost causes of a “throwaway” society are the upgrade in living standards and the proliferation of advertisements. First, the increasing living standards are likely to be followed by people's higher income. As people earn more, they are inclined towards spending money on goods instead of saving. When the accumulated products have reached capacity, they will be discarded as a result. Second, the advertising industry is aiming for meeting consumers’ demands by producing an increasing number of goods. In order to make a profit and induce people to purchase more, many companies opt for ameliorating the appearance of goods and providing misleading information about their products Whilst companies are making headway by constantly utilising these tactics, consumers are drawn to purchase unnecessary and short-lived commodities, which can directly lead to the existence and persistence of a “throwaway” society.
The development of a “throwaway” society can bring about adverse effects associated with the environment and young people’s behavior. People may put the environment on the line by inconsiderate methods of waste treatment. When a plethora of goods are quickly disposed of by consumers, the orthodox way is to bury or burn them. Admittedly, these disposal methods extensively harm the environment by accelerating soil pollution as well as air pollution. The second consequence imposed by a “throwaway” society is the deterioration of young people’s sense of saving. As consumerism is becoming a commonplace in the society, the perception of young people on spending can be altered. That is, the younger generation is prone to follow the negative spending habits of the adults, which will induce them to purchase more and more.
To sum up, a “throwaway” society is the consequence of today’s living standards and advertising strategies, and it can pose serious threats to the environment and young people’s spending habit. Unless the causes are thoroughly considered and rationally tackled, the harms will only be exacerbated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, well, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54874651811 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28402215028 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532033426184 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7868984669 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.176470588 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22962825374 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698011387001 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06298666762 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161275809863 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632899587122 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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