Today more and more people are using mobile phones and
Internet. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.
To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
In this generation, cell phone and information technology are increasing day by day. Therefore, people have no time to meet one another. I completely disagree with this statement. That is more beneficial for people.
Nowadays, Internet is an application of science which is use to solve problem. These days technology is booming little by little to compare previous generation. Human beings are exploring their skills by using these devices. If humankind does not use technology, they will be facing many problems. Nowadays, Internet and smart phone are rather beneficial for people. For instance, you can do everything with the help of internet and phone such as ascertain information of anything what you want, easily connect with people around the world by using social networks.
Smart phone and internet can also help people gain some valuable skills on communicating with other people. You can do video call or chart by using internet and also improve of communication skills. It is true that people have lost their face to face conversation ability but with the help of smart phone and internet, people have benefited from this. For instance, most companies are storing their valuable data on server as well as communicate with other company and customers to sale their product easily through internet. Today, anyone can take any course or degree on online to get a good job.
In my conclusion, cell phone and internet is more useful for human beings. However, it has become a basic necessary of humankind. Although, face to face conversation creates good relationship. People should try to understand and take some time to meet each other and have nice conversation.
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- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.To what extent, do you agree or disagree 61
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.To what extent, do you agree or disagree 61
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.To what extent, do you agree or disagree 61
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones andInternet. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face.To what extent, do you agree or disagree? 100
- Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation. 61
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... become a basic necessary of humankind. Although, face to face conversation creates good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74680338205 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2224684511 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0526315789 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275575650791 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782646762308 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620672929261 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168330992099 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319754173321 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.