today, more people are overweight than ever before. What is your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic.
In many nations nowadays, the number of obese people is constantly increasing. It is undeniable that the foremost causes of obesity are sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Meanwhile the possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and loss of productivity.
To commence with, the most prominent reason for rising the issue of overweight people is sendentary lifestyle. Today more and more people rely on cars instead of walking, do less physical activities on a regular basic or prefer inactive leisure activites. This, therefore, results in gaining weight and burning less calories. Moreover, an unhealthy eating habits, such as by eating irregularly, drinking high-calorie beverages and consuming large portions on food, is also the main cause of obesity. For instance, about 50% of adults population in Europe with so-called disordered eating suffer from obesity.
Given the above reasons, overweight people might be affected by unfavorable effects to many aspects in the life. First of all, the most clearly seen impact is the health-realted diseases. Not only the incorrect function of humanbody but also the risk of developing some chornic illnesses is due to obesity. For example, as body fat percentage increases, the person’s metabolism worsens, which may in turn result in diabetes or cardiovascular diseases. Secondly, overweight people are very unhealthy and often contract stress and tiredness. This lessens their work capacity and causes to loss of productivity. As a case in point, it has been proven that an obese person needs to put more effort to complete the task than a person with a normal weight.
To summarize, obesity is a big problem that affects a lot of people in mordern times. Overweightage has both sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits causes. In additon, it aslo results in several health problems and loss of productivity.
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Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion: habit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39932885906 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91700312931 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6296585648 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173995414047 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487073272506 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422120534937 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976271846003 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452033880795 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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