Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for travellers?
It is true that there is a spiraling demand for travelling among people. This trend towards travelling could be attributed to a number of reasons and there is no doubt that it brings about some great benefits.
To begin with, one reason that people nowadays show (can I use manifest?) more of their interest towards travelling than previous generations is that they have larger budgets to spend on their holidays. Families’ disposable incomes are now by far higher than they were in the past due to global economic development. As a consequence, they are more willing spend money on vacations and trips. Moreover, the development of social media serve as a catalyst for the immense need for travelling. It is common that People travelling often take and upload photos about the places they visit showing how happy they are to social platforms such as Facebook and Instagram. The popularity of these photos is considered as the best promotion that encourages people who saw them to travel and experience.
There is a variety of benefits travelers could reap through travelling. Firstly, travelling helps improve people’s mental health. Being on a vacation with friends and families is one of the best way to assuage the high stress level caused by long busy working periods. Secondly, by travelling, people broaden their understanding about the world. While visit a place, travelers have the opportunity to communicate with the local people, expose themselves to local traditions as well as experience the cuisine of the region and thus their knowledge is largely enriched. Finally, such kinds of travelling like camping trips bring people closer together. When going on a trip together, parents and their children could develop a strong family bonds.
In conclusion, travelling is becoming increasingly popular between people for some aforementioned reasons and people could be beneficial from this trend as it invigorate their mental’s health, play an active role in their knowledge accumulation and strengthen their family relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: More
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35076923077 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91586154004 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4732355261 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.294117647 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304655558599 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102871218293 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069103816137 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1934114992 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282234472012 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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