Unemployment is one of the greatest social problems of our time. In our modern world more and more school leavers have problems with finding a job. It is believed that the major cause of this phenomenon is a lack of qualification and experience. Most of the knowledge gained in schools is not consistent with general practices in the workplaces.
There are a lot of colleges and universities our days, so the number of educated and qualified people with degrees is increasing. There are plenty of people with profound knowledge in their field. And this fact causes harsh competition even among the educated people in finding a job.
Thus, taking into consideration that the job market is very demanding now and recruiters give their preference to qualified employees over unqualified and uneducated ones, it makes finding a job for school leavers much more challenging.
However, a universities degree is not needed in many service professions. In addition, practical training is much more important in some industries.
Therefore, the solution to this problem requires the commitment of the government and individuals. The Government should provide companies with taxation incentives. Moreover, youth should be provided with free of charge consultancy services. There they can be assisted in planning their future action in finding an appropriate job for them. Besides that, job training courses should be available for young adults. It will be quite helpful in getting practical training which is needed in many industries.
In conclusion, appropriate training courses and the government and individual commitment can help in tackling this serious problem.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Hieu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42471042471 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00282361418 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9393138264 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6470588235 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202226753712 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583837129938 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734147904614 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931351826468 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704629153938 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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