Nowadays, a considerable amount of food products consumed by people imported from other remote nations. One idea gained currency among the people is that consuming local products produced by native farmers would be beneficial with regard to economic and environmental aspects. The question here is whether the positive impact of using local food products have the edge over drawbacks?
As people consume products which are generated by regional agriculture, laying the groundwork for providing local people with ample job opportunities. This, in turn, causes the rate of employment soar in local places and consequently improve the income level of the indigenous people. Apart from that, if consumers place a premium on using those food products which are cultivated by native farmers, there are not required products freighted either throughout by airplanes, ships, and heavy trucks. These kinds of conveyances consume fossil fuel in bulk which has a detrimental effect on the environment. It means, the more local products people use, the less air pollution they have.
However, the downside cannot be ignored. Local agriculture fails to meet all the food products’ local customers considering that they have to rely on extrinsic resources from other regions or countries. Doing this leads to local people will not face the scarcity of products during a year. Moreover, cultivating some crops are not economical and place an undue burden on the local states. Take farming watermelon, for instance; in order to cultivate ten-pound this kind of fruit, farmers have to consume plenty of water more than other crops required. This requirement for cultivating watermelon causes those arid countries which involve with the dearth of water to prefer to import it from other countries.
In conclusion, regardless of some negative points, I believe that paying heed to local agriculture and advocating native farmers by purchasing their goods could be a positive attitude which leads to economic progress in countries and preserving the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4748427673 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81615844514 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3355827755 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256962266636 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902946215458 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593891334601 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161099852286 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679765629198 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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