currently online shopping become increasingly popular among the people all over the world. This trends shows profound impacts on the environment and the job types; this essay will point out the affects of online shopping on the environment and jobs.
Firstly, online purchase will pose severe threat to the environment because of many reasons; packaging transportation and trash disposal is more in online deals than in conventional shopping. For example; even for transporting small goods it needs a lot of plastic envelops, which eventually will become trash after the recipient recived the parcel. In addition online order of different things from different websites makes the worst impact of this issue. Secondly, online sales involves a big deal of transportation for the delivery purpose. The buyer is ready to pay any amount for his convienience, but the effect of green house gas emissions will make environmental impacts. Online purchase is possible from all places irrespective of borders, for example if a person in US order something from alibaba, which is a Chinese site, often the product is transported from China which require long transportation.
On the other hands, online shopping changed the type of jobs abruptly; the local manufactures and sales affected the worst. Online purchase become preffered choice for even villagers as it will reduce time spending in purchases. It reduced the job opportunities for the local people and small scale industries. For example; cloths are cheaper in online so people shops online instead of visiting local shops which will cause job and money loss for traders. In contrast online delivery and call centres created a number of new opportunities, which cannot be neglected. online sites are blooming all over the world which will attact a lot of youngsters with attractive skills in sales and customer care.
Overall, online shopping has a number of bad effects on environment but the job opportunities and convienience is exponentially increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Currently
currently online shopping become increasingly pop...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...er the recipient recived the parcel. In addition online order of different things from d...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ause job and money loss for traders. In contrast online delivery and call centres create...
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Suggestion: Online
...portunities, which cannot be neglected. online sites are blooming all over the world w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34069400631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89194454503 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5791190739 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28310995589 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10672774567 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992187370782 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226091721046 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904718998553 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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