Today, people are getting greedy and selfish. Some people argue that we should go back the old days and show respect for the family and community, so that we can make the world a better place to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some debatable ideas heating an argument that some people assume that the community in the past, when the respect for the old and family is valued is way better than this current society where people tend to be more ambitious and mean. While this thinking is valid to some certain extent, I would contend that individuals in this day still bring some tremendous advantages for the world.
It is undeniable that the old community can stand people in good stead compared to citizen for the time being. Since in the past, admiring and being grateful for older family members were considered a social norm which strictly required humans to follow, each individual would lessen the importance of their ego and be more willing to accept and listen seniors’ perspectives which might be pivotal for them to be a best version of themselves. If everyone became conservative to keep their own opinion although it is wrong, they would not have a chance to hone and enhance their skills and society would fall into chaos. Thus, it is imperative that human beings pay respect to each other to be more rounded citizens.
While the redeeming feature of the old days is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if that of this digital age is ignored. despite some selfish decisions, an ambitious person will be imperative in this fast-changing society. obviously, their choices which may harm to some people, but they can be an optimal option for their benefits in specific and for the planet in general. For example, adapting mass-production technologies in many factories in Vietnam can induce a high rate of redundancy of a pool of workers, yet it can help manufacturers expand their profits more drastically, benefiting the domestic gross production. Therefore, this can be necessary for improve the national economy.
To sum up, although people with moderate characteristics which drive them to admire the community positively impact a person’s growth, it is indisputable that a comparatively ambitious and mean individuals can vigorously boost countries prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: Despite
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Suggestion: Obviously
...perative in this fast-changing society. obviously, their choices which may harm to some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13353115727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86228814564 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581602373887 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9374303885 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180934338532 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074401483633 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574885394206 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118921014429 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619232371802 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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