Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Our lives are encompassed by many commercials through different mediums, including TV, radio, and newspapers. Many people believe that these promotions adversely affect our daily lives. This essay will discuss how different advertisements create false and sometimes cost us a fortune. Consequently our lives are suffering.
Firstly, advertising has been proven to be successful in alteration of human thinking. Many companies promote their products through various sources by making false claims and by overstating the effectiveness of their products. In commercials, corporations asset that their products have many benefits, but in reality, this is not the actual fact. One such example is that the famous shampoo manufacturer heads and shoulders claim that the company's shampoo can eliminate dandruff within two weeks. However, Many regular users have testified that the particular shampoo is not as effective. This is how these ads change the public's perspective only to drive sales of specific goods.
Secondly, Mass advertisement by many famous brands has proven to be very costly for people. Many brands are overemphasized in value and style by advertisement actors, hence youngsters and children tend to purchase these items at an inflated cost. For instance, The Popular shoe brand Nike advertises and sells their shoe pair at $150, but the manufacturing cost of the shoes is less than $20. This is the reason why many multinational corporate giants generate an enormous amount of profit through lucrative add campaigns.
To encapsulate, this is indeed a fact that our lives are negatively affected amid ongoing advertisements. I am in complete accord with the notion that the sellers, in fact, change consumer's mindset through aggressive promotions and make tonnes of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49454545455 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98506696632 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643636363636 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1365440439 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0631204589322 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237045061224 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464946839281 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434911853761 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319590887952 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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