Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of
communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh
the disadvantages?
It is irrefutable that now there are many modes of transportation and technology sources, by which people can easily live and work in any part of the world. Although there are certain disadvantages associated with this trend, the upsides in this case seem to outweigh the downsides.
It is true that today person are able to work and live anywhere, where they want. Firstly, people have more choices of jobs because of technology advancement. They get a job according to wish and now they are not bind in one area to find job either because of modern transport facilities. For example, through modern transport, they can easily commute from one area or country to another area or country. Secondly, even if, people could not meet with each other daily but communication technology has made easier to communicate each day with others people by the use of internet. For instance, those people who have to live in other countries for the purpose of work, they can easily talk with their families thanks to modern communication channels.
On the downsides, because of communication technology, they easily talk on social sites without meeting, while face to face conversation are disappearing. Moreover, people became so dependent on technology. Even, they use mobile phone to talk with their family members, even though, they live under one roof. Another disadvantage is that they do not want to walk, whereas for going to short distance because they want to reach as soon as and use modern transport.
In conclusion, Although some people highlight the disadvantages of this, I opine that these are minor disadvantages comparison to numerous advantages which modern technology are providing, by this now person are able to work and live anywhere according to their own wish.
- Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1198630137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8126489452 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6949525467 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444813196378 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147033939285 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646827701489 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260102021467 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191101563864 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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