In the mordern societies, we truly priority the effects of advanced sciences and technologies. Whereas, artist such as musicians, painters and writers are still appreciate because of thier profound value, in particularly cutural and spiritual impacts.
To begin with, withoud doubt to say that art has a mission to nurture human mental healtg. when sciences and technologies facilitate our physical life by digital equipments and artificial intelligience applications, work of art like visual arts, performances and music coveys lots of precious meanings in life. therefore, they help us release stress after working, including reducing the risk of depression -according to many recent studies.
work of artists is a consequence of multiple-side view when mordern findings are results of one-side view. For instance, let pretend we are anjoying a masterpiece of abtract art. whether the process is simple by our dicrect vision or it need far more intensive anylizations. Following this, art makes us more creative, open-minded and to have a comprehension about a particular problem.
the last but not least, art certaintly break the barrier of cutural limitation among countries. in the state of these days, we tend to flexibly interact with a diversity of heritage worldwide. As a result, we have opportunity to contact and understand each other in a deeper way. Art brings individuals together by their own beauty and then these connection would like to stand in the test of time because of reserving these work.
In brief, artists and their work play a fundamental role consisting of nourishing people's inner soul, creating humanity and mantaining unity across the world. These are core elements of building human civilization those sciences and technologies are unable to solve well. Utimately, the development of new-cutting edges has to go hand in hand with art progress
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...sicians, painters and writers are still appreciate because of thier profound value, in par...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...mission to nurture human mental healtg. when sciences and technologies facilitate ou...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...veys lots of precious meanings in life. therefore, they help us release stress after work...
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Suggestion: Work
...ion -according to many recent studies. work of artists is a consequence of multiple...
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Suggestion: Whether
... anjoying a masterpiece of abtract art. whether the process is simple by our dicrect vi...
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Suggestion: The
...prehension about a particular problem. the last but not least, art certaintly brea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... of cutural limitation among countries. in the state of these days, we tend to fle...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this connection' or 'these connections'?
Suggestion: this connection; these connections
...s together by their own beauty and then these connection would like to stand in the test of time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in brief, in particular, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38305084746 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02365660779 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664406779661 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7567489551 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239022372671 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613483008604 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484114809951 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118332610062 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494531110575 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.