In today’s world, it’s private companies rather than government to pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?
In our modern-day society, it is a fact that the number of private companies participating in scientific research is increasing rapidly. The question of whether this trend can bring benefits or not still remains controversial. Personally, I am firmly of the former opinion because of the following reasons.
To begin with, it is believed that the government can allocate budgets to many other areas of public spending. The priorities of expenditures spent on national infrastructure such as traffic systems or educational and heath-care facilities can lead to the development in quality of citizens’ life. For instance, the decrease of overburden in many hospitals can improve the treatment process, resulting in the higher survival rate in severe patients.
Another point to consider is the diversity of researches carried out by private companies. Since the human and financial resources of the government is still limited, the wide range of scientific investigations of private sector can contribute to the early discoveries of new conclusions leading to the improvements in many fields of life.
Some opponents of the above idea may claim that the researches conducted by private sector is not reliable. For example, a research about a nutrition facts of fried potato carried out by a processed food manufacturer may provide an untrustworthy point of view. This can be true to some extent. However, the censorship of government before the publication of information can solve this issue.
In conclusion, the participation of private companies in scientific research can bring benefits for not only the government but also the whole nation. The more responsible contribution of private sector makes, the faster the nation will develop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...entific research is increasing rapidly. The question of whether this trend can bring benefits or not st...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The priorities of expenditures spent on national infrastructure such as traffic ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ens’ life. For instance, the decrease of overburden in many hospitals can improve...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...te sector is not reliable. For example, a research about a nutrition facts of fried potato...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44649446494 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18294292527 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3839588246 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191275101565 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668787360266 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678322418713 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11371083076 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502758706169 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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