Topic 1 : An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the reasons behind this trend ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation ?
There is an increase in the number of intellectuals such as doctors and teachers finding opportunities in other developed nations rather than their hometowns. This essay will discuss several factors that contributed to this tendency and suggest some solutions.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why this trend moving to new region known as “brain drain” happens and grows rapidly. One of the major factors related to this is that fewer jobs with suitable incomes for professionals in their poorer countries than others. For instance, many doctors and experts decide to work in foreign workplaces such as reputational hospitals to earn decent wages to cover their bills. In addition, another reason for this phenomenon is that numerous modern facilities and valuable certifications engage talented people. As a consequence, poor regions have to face threats to economic development because of the lack of essential people.
On the other hand, some serious attempts must be made to remedy the situation. First, one solution to this problem is for authorities and companies to recruit intellectuals in crucial positions and pay salaries according to their strengths. As a result, they will have the motivation to work and dedicate themselves to national enhancement. Moreover, constructing high-tech conditions is necessary and needed to be concentrated. To be more detailed, professional organizations will have an opportunity to perform important experiments and provide accurate results.
To sum up, the tendency of the term brain drain causes so many problems for the poorer nations and mainly due to unfair conditions. If governments pay attention to ameliorating infrastructures and creating policies in terms of income, those countries will be ideal places for both domestic and international talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09798529351 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.862181314 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246819967018 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736971866241 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636204666664 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144150930532 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872118128585 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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