Topic 1: Some students prefer to take a gap year and between high school university to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Education is the key to success for each and every...
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...h and every person.some learners like to take a break after high school to visit...
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...rson.some learners like to take a break after high school to visit other place o...
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...re are some merits of taking distruption between senior secondary and collage. F...
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...ts of taking distruption between senior secondary and collage. Firstly, they get...
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...s are very stressful and there are much less holidays in school and load is also to...
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...d there are much less holidays in school and load is also too much as some subje...
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...ays in school and load is also too much as some subjects are boring . Secondly,...
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...d is also too much as some subjects are boring . Secondly, going to diffrent spo...
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...o too much as some subjects are boring . Secondly, going to diffrent spot for to...
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...ndly, going to diffrent spot for tourism broaden the horizon of their mind as th...
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...nt spot for tourism broaden the horizon of their mind as they come to know abou...
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...izon of their mind as they come to know about new culture as well as circumstan...
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...f their mind as they come to know about new culture as well as circumstances tha...
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...ell as circumstances that how to stay at new accommodation and work in changing ...
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...s circumstances that how to stay at new accommodation and work in changing envir...
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...rk in changing environment. For example, a person continue his study immediately ...
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...tinue his study immediately after senior secondary he will not able to concentra...
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...tudy immediately after senior secondary he will not able to concentrate unlike ...
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...condary he will not able to concentrate unlike a individuals who take gap . On...
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...he will not able to concentrate unlike a individuals who take gap . On the fli...
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...he will not able to concentrate unlike a individuals who take gap . On the flip side, ther...
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...trate unlike a individuals who take gap . On the flip side, there are some deme...
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... side, there are some demerits oc taking break ,first of all institutions gave ad...
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...there are some demerits oc taking break ,first of all institutions gave admission...
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...till some dates and if once the deadline missed they have to wait for more time t...
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...ey have to wait for more time than usual .furthermore, another bad impact of i...
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...t for more time than usual .furthermore, another bad impact of itruption on ma...
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...e time than usual .furthermore, another bad impact of itruption on masses is t...
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...usual .furthermore, another bad impact of itruption on masses is that the habi...
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...l .furthermore, another bad impact of itruption on masses is that the habit o...
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...f itruption on masses is that the habit of studying is disturbed as they are not...
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...ot willing to attend classes like usual.For instance, children without delay have ...
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...lasses like usual.For instance, children without delay have learn better than oth...
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...earn better than others. In conclusion , i restate that there are both goog and ...
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...n better than others. In conclusion , i restate that there are both goog and ba...
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... bad impact of gap but bad one overweigh good one.
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...mpact of gap but bad one overweigh good one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88796680498 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70439637295 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663900414938 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.961455043 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.285714286 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.8571428571 7.06120827912 310% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14230960278 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654314073394 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387753951878 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765416253972 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383762730186 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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