Topic 21: The quality of life in big cities is decreasing. What are the causes and what actions should be taken to solve this problem?
Nowadays, it is said that, despite the high development in some certain facilities such as infrastructure, living in urban areas has to suffer from the decline in the quality. The causes of the given problem are varied, and some solution tackling this will also be discussed below.
There are many negative factors make the living quality in large urban areas decrease, but just two of them are most concerned. First of all, the overpopulation is easy to realise in cities throughout not only the high birth rate but also the number of immigrants pursuing careers in here. Therefore, if there are many people living in the same place, the suitable public facilities will be not enough for all of them such as the medical equipment in the hospitals. Second, as can be seen, that the urban areas are usually recorded with the higher possibility of pollution than others. In fact, large cities attract lots of enterprises and factories, which emitted the gases into the atmosphere or pump the sewage into the rivers carelessly. When the city residents expose to this chemical stuff, they can suffer from many serious diseases among which lung cancer and sore throat are typical examples.
To handle this detrimental tendency, solutions should be applied immediately. The first one is that the local authorities must have the responsibility for stabilizing the citizens’ life. For instance, they should enact and pass the law which helps to limit the number of people immigrating to the city. Additionally, this approach also plays a crucial role in the crime reduction. The media campaign is another option to solve this problem. Nowadays, media has the impact on the behaviours of people, so taking advantage in it can help to express the message. By this, they will have more perspectives about where they are living and aware of the phenomenon among which gases and sewage caused be factories and firms are typical examples.
In conclusion, although there are so many reasons that cause the decrease in the quality of life in urban areas, some effective solutions could handle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06628242075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67588833419 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0881024555 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181783965406 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609203714294 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533363392576 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118378134549 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367837893896 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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