Topic - Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements . Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people .
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Traffic jam has become more and more serious all over the world. Although frequently free public transportation tools is a good way to mitigate traffic congestion, I would argue that there are some other methods that can be taken to solve this problem.
Free public transport can benefit to those who are worried about being late for work because they are more likely to drive their own cars if they do not catch on public vehicles in time, and this will lead to an increasing number of cars on the road. For instance, people who spend much time waiting for buses may choose to take private cars or taxi. As a result, there will probably be more and more cars on the road. In contrast, the more intense free public buses, the better the traffic condition, due to the fact that people take public buses instead of own cars.
Imposing a tax on drivers is also a good solution to reduce traffic congestion. These people who drive their cars may consider economic context if the cost of driving cars is too high, they are likely to give up driving their own cars, instead taking public transportation tools. For example, people who commute to work by private cars are subject to tax will take the subway to go to work, because they may not have enough money to pay for this fee. As a consequence, traffic congested problem can be partially addressed.
Another way is to raise people's environmental awareness, which makes them understand the increasing number of cars can cause damage to the environment. For example, governments can organize some activities to disseminate the impact of cars emissions on air quality. If they understand its adverse influence, they may begin to take subways or other public vehicles. Therefore, traffic congestion can be solved to some extent.
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 11
- Topic - Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements . Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people .To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53972665008 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4713770818 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177791637781 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698677204586 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475096752047 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115305377001 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411027378749 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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