A child of today is man of tomorrow. Now adays, the number of professionals such as doctors , teachers, engineers are increasing in there poorer countries. However, Government have limited number of jobs given to professionals.Apart from that, poorer countries have not been good enviornment and other opportunities.While, in the development countries, they gave more opportunities and more good jobs provides to professtionals.Although, many professionals are settle in there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...re good jobs provides to professtionals.Although, many professionals are settle in there...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re good jobs provides to professtionals.Although, many professionals are settle in there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 409.0 1615.20841683 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 68.0 315.596192385 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01470588235 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.87162171103 4.20363070211 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.44717412499 2.80592935109 158% => OK
Unique words: 53.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.779411764706 0.561755894193 139% => OK
syllable_count: 122.4 506.74238477 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.7951956 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169829917051 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111796023553 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101589722835 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169829917051 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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