Marriage is an extremely beautiful relationship between two bodies and souls. In the current time of advancement, one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic that is it necessary for women to get married; either being able to earn their own income? I am completely agree with this topic and shall explore the dimensions and assertions of this essay and shape up my opinion by the end.
To begin with, there are some women in most of the countries whom perception is not to get married. There are numeral reasons behind it. The first and foremost is the education, in the past era, girls were not alloweded to study because it was the male-dominating society. Moreover, males had been considered superior than women therefore, only boys had the right to go to school and study. Furthermore, it had resulted in that parents of the girls used to prefer to marry them regardless being studied. However, now, the world has totally been changed and the mentality of people too. For instance, women are studying and taking initiative to compete with men. There is a huge change between past and present world, women are superior than boys in every field; either it be educational or professional.
Apart from that, women do not want to be married as they think that they would lose their freedom. They have a belief that before marriage, they are free from restrictions and narrow boundaries as they can easily go where they want to go whereas, after being married, they have to follow the rules and regulations of their in-laws. In spite of this, in-laws can put pressure on them to do every work regarding their will. For example, a survey was conducted by the university of Delhi, 200 women had been interviewed and 150 out of 200 asked that they did not want to marry because their would-be in-laws family wanted them not to continue their job further so they neglected to get married.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that it does not matter whether women are married or not. They not only became educated but also talented and not rely on the other person because they are liable to touch the sky with glory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... earn their own income? I am completely agree with this topic and shall explore the d...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...ver, males had been considered superior than women therefore, only boys had the righ...
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Line 3, column 736, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...t and present world, women are superior than boys in every field; either it be educa...
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Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ior than boys in every field; either it be educational or professional. Apart fro...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... They not only became educated but also talented and not rely on the other perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72043010753 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50025435173 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0045223727 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.294117647 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136691242848 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043037048111 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460508710128 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816045733719 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515120706231 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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