In the current time of technological advancements; one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given topic asserts that whether children get an extra benefit, if the both parents work or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic from both points of views and shape up my opinion by the end.
On the one hand, there are some people who believe that if the parents are working, children get number of benefits and lead a charmful and affluent life. They bolster their view point by claiming that in this materialistic world, it would be extremely difficult for the parents to survive with their children without enough money, therefore, it is must for both parents to work to fulfill the needs and wishes of their children. For instance, children take participation in various activities, apart from schooling, such as going to trips, campaigns, expensive toys or school functions and they want things out of the use, just for the sake of pleasure, which required humongous amount of money , if tge parents would go out for work, then, they would be capable of fulfill their child's dreams.
On the other hand, there are some antagonists to this assertion who further claim that children become isolated and far from their patents if the parents are working. Moreover, they need an emotional support in such a childish age and due to the lack of it, they can follow negative paths and probably, become prone to behavioural problems. One epitome of this is that childhood is the part when children need their parents close to them so that they can share their feelings and acquire precise guidance from them in the early stage of their lives.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, I tend to believe that although, children lack emotional support and time from their parents, however, it is also not possible to survive properly unless both the parents do not work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...which required humongous amount of money , if tge parents would go out for work, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, apart from, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99378881988 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5237420873 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3700894822 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.666666667 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7777777778 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326312935408 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13700285868 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558280873666 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191176437585 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596091943052 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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