In the recent era, people have been facing different health-related issues due to their contemporary form of lifestyle which can not be cured by advanced medical treatment. Therefore, some people are willing to take archaic remedies, whereas it is true that old-fashioned treatments are not able to tackle some chronic diseases. From my side, I partly agree with the statement.
On the one hand, the prevailing diseases mostly related to lack of regular exercise or taking unhygienic food such as junk food. It is not possible for neither modern nor oriental cures to make an impairment against chronic diseases without a healthy way of life. Nowadays most people lead a sedentary life and they have to take more physical, and mental pressure, therefore, in recent times, mental stress among people is more than in the past which expedites the growth of different incurable illnesses like, diabetics, high blood pressure. Moreover, at present time, eating habits have changed a lot, people are more interested to have fast food items as a result men bodies are more vulnerable for many fatal diseases.
On the other hand, primitive remedies are suitable for all because it has no side effects. In addition, traditional remedies are accessible and affordable. These are made from plants and herbs so the cost is so low, therefore, patients can save money. Furthermore, it has totally safe, and natural which is free from toxicity, and chemical components. For example, when people get cold they take some antibiotics which have many impacts on the human body such as allergies, weakening the body, and so on, while this can be treated by garlic which is effective, and no side effects.
In conclusion, modern, and traditional medicine both have the strongest sides and weaknesses, but the combination of both will eradicate many diseases. So, the government should encourage the people to use primitive methods.
- The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 85
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The bar graph below represents the data about the clubs joined by the people of two different age groups at a leisure center Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The chart below shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of two air pollutants in four big cities in 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18649517685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73968569927 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627009646302 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5613168607 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251082919049 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736638213622 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460634564779 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145887204881 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286273146717 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.